Oh dear. This is purely personal :) ‘too’ is probably not a big deal for so many people. I hope no one takes it as criticism.
Kind of also why I am both happy and not with this poem; it’s the closest I’ve gotten to explaining yet it still doesn’t say why, this time, ‘too’ just feels like ‘no’.

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